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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts illustrate the percentage of citizens in
Yemen
 and
Italia
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Italy
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 based on three
age
 groups and projections for 2050.
Overall
,
while
people
 under 14
years
 accounted for the majority of the population of
Yemen
, most Italians were
at
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the
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age
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of
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15- 59
years
. It is predicted that the populations of two both countries will become older in 2050. In 2000,
people
 in the 0-14
age
 group comprised
a
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half of the population of
Yemen
while
 Italians in the same bracket just took up 14,3%.
On the contrary
,
people
 at the
age
 of 15-59 in
Yemen
 made up 46,3%
while
 in
Italia
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 the percentage of
people
 in
this
age
 bracket was nearly
two thirds
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, at 61,6%.
Likewise
, residents over 60
years
 old in
Yemen
 constituted the minority of its population at 3,6%
while
 the proportion of
this
age
 group in
Italia
 was nearly a quarter. In 2050, It is estimated that
people
 below 14
years
 old in both
Yemen
 and
Italia
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Italy
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 will decrease to reach 37% and 11,5% respectively
while
 citizens over 60
years
 in the two countries will ascend to hit 5,7% and 42,3% each. Meanwhile,
people
 in the middle
age
 group
is
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 predicted to rise to reach more than
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half, at 57,3% in
Yemen
 and drop to hit 46,2% in
Italia
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, italia, age, people, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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