In recent years ,it has been noticed that a significant number of individuals who go to popular
attractions go there to snap
of themselves,
of looking at the place. I believe
is because most
are no longer focusing on their cultural significance and human values have
changed.
, I think
is a negative trend and
essay will explore my reasons.
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nowadays visit
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to take photographs of themselves without going around for sightseeing because most of these
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are no longer paying attention to acquiring important historical collections or guides who could help
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learn about these collections or past events. Most galleries now spend their money on the beautification of their
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of acquiring or protecting collections, and
makes it a good location to take selfies. Most of the tour guides are not very knowledgeable about history or most historical items making it difficult for them to answer questions from tourists,
no longer see the need to enter these
.
, research has shown that many
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of their time in art galleries taking
with friends or family rather than going around to appreciate the beautiful paintings or sculptures.
,
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and they go online to look for
that have beautiful sceneries mainly because of
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.
, In my
is a negative trend owing to the fact that it leads to loss of cultural heritage and significance. A vast number of individuals are no longer interested in learning about culture or the history of their environment making them
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lose their sense of identity.
, foreign tourists who come around are not able to learn and appreciate other
's culture because their attention too
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been diverted to snapping photos
inhibiting cultural transmission among them .
,
a survey carried out among
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showed that the majority of them spend time taking shots rather than listening to their tour guides .
In conclusion, an increasing number of
these days visit common museums or exhibition houses to take
with others because the priorities of those in charge of these
have shifted towards only the beautification of these
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and
now
prefer to come there to create memories
of learning. I believe that
trend is negative because it would lead to the loss of cultural significance,
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of identity and later extinction if actions are not taken to curb
phenomenon.