People are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. They both have important and negative influences on our lives. Do you agree or disagree?

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Different types of advertising are becoming popular nowadays
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I strongly agree that they have both benefits and downsides. On the one hand, advertising is an important part of our lives
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As most advertisements introduce new products in the market with their highlighted features via various media channels, people can collect a huge amount of information, and
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stay abreast of the latest available products.
For example
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, thanks to some advertising campaigns
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smartphone companies
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as Samsung and Apple, many people who are not experts can still be updated with advances in smartphone technology
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as fast charging and waterproof phones.
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, advertising can be even more useful when customers need to make buying decisions. Once people
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have been exposed
to different products of similar types, they can make comparison in terms of features, price, or promotion programs before purchasing a new product.
On the other hand
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, advertising can have negative effects on people.
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, many advertisements appearing too frequently and repeatedly on television and social
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
will eventually become very annoying. Assume that a show, which is one of the most-watched television broadcasts, are constantly interrupted by some commercial videos after twenty to thirty-minute intervals
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can grow frustration and anger of its audience because they
can not
can not
cannot
watch their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
program
continuously but
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continuously, but
have to spend time waiting for the advertisements to end
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, some companies tend to exaggerate products’ features in order to make them more attractive to customers.
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, when consumers believe too much in information from advertisements, they can feel disappointed since the products fail to meet their expectations. Laundry detergent advertisements,
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, usually use very strong expressions
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as “remove any tough strain in one wash” to persuade people to buy, but in fact, the effectiveness of the products limited to some grease and oil stains
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leading to losing customers’ trust. In conclusion, advertising brings
people both
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people, both
advantages and disadvantages. As a customer, a person can have the benefit of informative contents
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advertisements;
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, they can
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suffer great inconvenience caused by repetitive or misleading advertisements.
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