During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter … • Remind him when and where you met. • Tell him what kind of job you are interested in. • Say why you think you would be suitable for the job.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you because we met in the fight that I sit

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to you, so you gave to me a business card and

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offered

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possible job in your restaurant. I am pretty excited about

this

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opportunity because since I was a child, I have been dreamed to work in a restaurant. I am finishing my degree in gastronomy and I have been searching for an opportunity to work in a restaurant as a chef. I strongly believe that I am a great person for

this

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job because I have been studying and improving my skills to be prepared for

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moment. I have studied for three years in Germany learning the best recipes in the world. I won the Master Chef TV program the

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year with

a delicious rice

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. If have any concern, please let me know, so I am totally available to you. Please contact me with the number on my curriculum vitae. Best Regards Jhones

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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5 paragraphs

165 words

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chain of restaurants
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