Some people think that radio has become out-of-date, and there is no need to listen to the radio for entertainment and news. Do you agree or disagree?
Radio
recently are obsoleted with the listeners, and it is gradually ignored. While I agree that radio
are no longer used in these days, i
disagree that people find no need for it when it comes to entertainment and news.
It is true that refers to the speaker or writer
I
radio
recently are out of date. Because of the emergence of technology, there are more modern devices such
as mobile phone, tablet, computer. The user finds them more convenient and friendly to listen to music or news. They can bring these items anywhere, anytime that they want. Specifically, they can listen to music with a headphone while they are hitting the gym or some calm songs while they are studying in public places. Another reason is that radio
has just announced randomly. By this
, the listeners sometimes do not want to listen to. Especially children, whenever it plays political news or revolutionary songs, they easily fed up with these genres.
However
, i
oppose the view that there is no need to the refers to the speaker or writer
I
radio
for entertainment and news nowadays, Firstly
, mostly radio
is installed in car, truck. Drivers can listen to music or news on them while driving, which is very comfortable. Another reason worth mentioning is that it is a reasonable equipment for people who do not have enough money for buying modern devices, especially for those who live in the countryside. By this
, they also
know many things in society and foreign countries. As a result
, their life is also
improved by gaining some useful knowledge in news from broadcast radio
.
In conclusion, while i
agree refers to the speaker or writer
I
radio
are becoming less popular. I am of the opinion that it is necessary for people to use in a certain situation.Submitted by piyanoot.lot on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite