You have an extended family and every year you all get together to go on a family trip for a week. Your uncle is in charge of the plans this year and you would like to suggest a place you have visited lately. Write a letter to your uncle. In your letter: suggest the place you recommend describe your experience in this place mention what you could do there
Dear Uncle,
I hope
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email finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I am writing Linking Words
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letter to suggest a beautiful place where you can plan and visit for a week.
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garden
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it is located on the bank of stunning Dal Lake, Kashmir which is known as the heaven of earth.
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this
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authority was really cooperative and friendly. Use synonyms
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, we have got a lot of information about the history of Linking Words
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garden
and locality as well from the highly experienced guide. Use synonyms
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, the sunset view from Linking Words
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was really outstanding.
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, I can help you to contact the Use synonyms
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authority regarding your upcoming trip including hotel booking, transportation, and food arrangements.
I think you may plan with the above-mentioned place as it will be a good place to have a great trip with family members.
I look forward to hearing from you soon regarding your final tour plan.
Yours lovingly,
ThomasUse synonyms
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structure
Try to break your paragraphs more clearly to define each idea distinctly. Each paragraph should focus on a single theme, such as introducing the idea, describing the place, and suggesting activities.
detail
Enhance your letter by including more specific examples or personal stories. Adding details about what makes the garden unique or a memorable moment you experienced would strengthen your argument.
cohesion
To improve the transition between ideas, use a wider range of connectors and phrases that indicate sequence, contrast, or result. This will make your letter flow more smoothly.
closure
Conclude your letter with a stronger closing statement that reiterates your recommendation and expresses anticipation or a call to action, inviting a response.
content
For a higher task achievement score, ensure that your letter thoroughly addresses all points in the prompt. Include more suggestions on what can be done at the location, as this was briefly mentioned.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.