Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Nowadays, high volume of rubbish produced in the world is commonly discussed topic in our society. Some people assert that mostly of
this
rubbish comes from by high consumption of unnecessary items, most with low quality.
In addition
, plastic and aluminium are a big problem too. In the past, the industry had more quality in their products, which were more durable. People did not need to swap frequently. With globalisation and the China
market increasing
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market, increasing
the products has been less quality and the necessity to change it are more frequent, making people discarding them generating more and more rubbish. The other point to consider is, 40 years ago people could not imagine how bad plastics and aluminium would be to the environment. Many products
has still been developed
Suggestion
have still been developed
with those kind of materials, which is very aggressive to the planet and human being as well.
For example
: cans, plastic bottles, packaging in general are not bio-degradable and cause serious damage to the environment including animals, especially those lives in the ocean.
Furthermore
, we have more information about those materials, and more options to decide what/where to buy something eco-friendly. Good products are more available on the supermarket shelves and our consciousness seems more aware about those products.
Finally
, considering the point discussed previously, it is clear to state that the world population needs to be more aware about the environment preservation just changing habits consuming before our planet getting in collapse.
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