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Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that tourism contributes a great deal to economics in many countries nowadays. More and more tourists visit other countries and they use money before
then
. But I
also
 suppose the idea that tourism can have a negative effect on the local cultures and the natural environment. I would say we should notion
this
 for
tourist
Suggestion
tourists
the tourist
. The reason why I thought that some popular
tourist
 site faced with sea pollution and waste.
For example
, in Okinawa, there are many beautiful white sand beaches and specific wild animals.
However
, too many
tourist
Suggestion
tourists
 visiting and building of hotels
exposes
Suggestion
is exposed
 to their
lives
Suggestion
life's
 danger. They can destroy the habitat of wild animals and natural environment. I think
such
 unseen dangerous things might explain for
tourist
.
Then
 local wild animals and tourists can stay
cozy
enjoying or affording comforting warmth and shelter especially in a small space
cosy
crazy
 and stop the environmental pollution of there.
Furthermore
, sight seeing governments should introduce laws to protect natural environments and local cultures. It can protect
tourist
 places in natural environment and local
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. Some popular place needs many
tourists but
Accept comma addition
tourists, but
 now is not welcome. After these laws introduced there, there are more easy to stay and
tourist’s
Suggestion
tourist
 activity might change. For the reasons mentioned above, I believe tourism need to take care of local places nature and culture. By doing
this
, sight seeing place can accept more tourists and improve economics. For local people and wild animals can stay relief. Tourism have
bright part
Suggestion
a bright part
a bright path
 for tourists
for
instance relax
Accept comma addition
instance, relax
 and refresh. But it should not be disturbing local lives.
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