Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that tourism contributes a great deal to economics in many countries nowadays. More and more tourists visit other countries and they use money before

then

. But I

also

suppose the idea that tourism can have a negative effect on the local cultures and the natural environment. I would say we should notion

this

for

tourist

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tourists

the tourist

. The reason why I thought that some popular

tourist

site faced with sea pollution and waste.

For example

, in Okinawa, there are many beautiful white sand beaches and specific wild animals.

However

, too many

tourist

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tourists

visiting and building of hotels

exposes

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is exposed

to their

lives

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life's

danger. They can destroy the habitat of wild animals and natural environment. I think

such

unseen dangerous things might explain for

tourist

Then

local wild animals and tourists can stay

cozy

enjoying or affording comforting warmth and shelter especially in a small space

cosy

crazy

and stop the environmental pollution of there.

Furthermore

, sight seeing governments should introduce laws to protect natural environments and local cultures. It can protect

tourist

places in natural environment and local

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

. Some popular place needs many

tourists but

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tourists, but

now is not welcome. After these laws introduced there, there are more easy to stay and

tourist’s

Suggestion

tourist

activity might change. For the reasons mentioned above, I believe tourism need to take care of local places nature and culture. By doing

this

, sight seeing place can accept more tourists and improve economics. For local people and wild animals can stay relief. Tourism have

bright part

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a bright part

a bright path

for tourists

for

instance relax

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instance, relax

and refresh. But it should not be disturbing local lives.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Economic growth
Cultural dilution
Environmental degradation
Responsible tourism
Ecotourism
Cultural conservation
Habitat destruction
Sustainable practices
Cultural exchange
Commercialization of cultural sites
Cultural heritage
Local ecosystems

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Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university, to work or travel. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In schools and universities, girl tend to choose arts subjects, while boys choose science subjects. What is the reason? Should the trend be changed?

Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.