The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists?

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Today, with the power of
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the internet
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we can easily get access to the latest world news.You can search up about anything
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Even though there are a lot of journalists around the world who are good at their work
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people still can’t trust the news with journalists found out. Nowadays there is a competition between journalists.Everyone tries to find news as fast as possible and establish it
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Some journalists may report
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news, which
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Even more, some of them report a
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news to attract public’s attention
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And they get paid for that.People believe that the news they are reading
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every day
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On the other hand
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there are some honest reporters
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These people we can always trust and believe.They are professional at their work.These journalists try their best to find the best news.They work 24 hours a day
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They try their best to find evidence to back up their news.Now everyone is in their
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and they can’t go out.People watch news everyday.It helps them to know what is going on around the world. In conclusion, I think that we need something from which we can check if the news are true or not.Because if we keep reading fake news
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in the future people won’t believe the news which they are reading
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Or journalists should provide evidence to their report
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So that people who are reading them can trust their extract.It will be good for us and them because we will know that the news will never lie.
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