When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#town #parks #sports #facilities #centers #people #time

In today's modern Busy lifestyle people needs some

time

where they can spend and do their favourite activities to make their

mind

and

body

relax.Authorities

also

need to know the issues, peoples facing and

also

make some are where they can spend their quality

time

Such

as public parks, sports facilities for young generation. I strongly agree with the given statement and give my explanation

further

Fully explain your ideas

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365 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions

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