Main Topic: Some people think that schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet while others believe that nothing can replace physical classrooms with direct guidance from teachers.Discuss both views( and give your own opinion).
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others think that teachers and Accept space
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are really important in everyone’s learning so nothing can replace them.From my point of viewUse synonyms
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it’s better for students to learn in Accept space
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physical
classes with direct guidance from teachers.
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there are people who hold the opinion that learning online will get better results.The most compelling reasons for believing that a giant search engine on Accept space
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internet
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students can easily search new knowledge which is updated Accept space
,
everyday
in favour of Suggestion
every day
student’s learning
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a student’s learning
the student’s learning
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students can get more Accept space
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informations
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instead
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text book
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text books
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Nevertheless
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online learning brings many disadvantages to students.Accept space
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Internet
is a giant search engine which helps students get more Suggestion
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information
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are authenticated
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students who don’t have sound aware of choosing Accept space
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information
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Moreover
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the cost of studying online is more expensive than the cost of physical classroomsAccept space
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which is not affordability by some people.
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On the other hand
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other
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school
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face to face interaction between students and teachers are ensured in order to help teachers supervise students more easily.Use synonyms
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can students participate in curriculum activities with friends Accept space
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student’s learning
.Most types of books for students are not constantly updatedSuggestion
the student’s learning
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want
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to timetable if she Accept comma addition
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school
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school
have their own advantages and disadvantages.In my opinionUse synonyms
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study
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the study
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where is poorAccept space
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the quality of life is low and people don’t have opportunities approach to technology.Accept space
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the internet
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living conditions only allow them to go to Accept space
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school
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although
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but Accept space
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school
and teachers cannot be replaced by nothing.
In conclusions, learning on Use synonyms
internet
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physical
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still have many drawbackUse synonyms
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