Some people think parents should not encourage children to do part-time jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Nowadays, in our over consumptive society, working plays a vital role in our's and our family's sustaining. Due to
this
ever increasing importance, some parents send their children to work part-time in their teenage years, while others argue that this
course of action is not beneficial for their child. In my opinion working from a young age is very important. In this
essay I will discuss both views.
Firstly
, the benefits for the young one and the family are numerous. At first
glance, because of the money that the teenager will be collecting, through his hard-earned labour, it will give him the feel of being independent and help him realise what is waiting for him in the future. Moreover
, due to the above, the individual will, in most cases,
mature fasterAccept space
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with multiple positive outcomes for him. To illustrate, from my own experience being employed in a restaurant from the age of 15, I had the chance to view the world with a different eye and make better and more mature decisions in my life, Accept space
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such
as following a career in medicine. Lastly
, the payout of his job can help out his parents, so that they can have more economic freedom.
On the other hand
, there are some negative views on this
case. First
of all, part-time labour can accumulate most of the free-time that teenagers have to either study or have extracurricular activities. As a result
, some students might see a decrease in their grades and disregard their future, while also
, the lack of hobbies might affect their mental stability. For example
, a study carried out by the University of Cambridge, showed that, children that have a lack of leisure activities have a 10% more likely to be depressed in the future. Finally
, the fatigue, due to the workload and lack of sleep can also
affect his school performance.
In conclusion, having a part-time job as a youngster has positive and negative aspects to it. But, it's my firm belief that, with the correct monitoring from the youngster's parents,
it can help him prosper in his life.Accept space
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