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Nowadays, people are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why do they do so? Suggest measures to solve this problem

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There is no doubt that sugar-based drinks have a detrimental effect on human health. Our society in the present are consuming these drinks heavily for many reasons like advertisement campaigns on televisions and its stimulating taste. Governments can take some actions to reduce
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 consumption by their people like announcing a health campaign and advise the companies to decline the percentage of sugar in these drinks. On the one hand, the people started to surge in consuming sugar-based drinks without stops or knowing
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 effect on our life. People drunk a sugar-based drinks heavily due to advertisement campaign, which shows every minute on it.v., and the producing companies are sponsored for most well-known events on it.v.
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, celebrated football players and actors are announcing that they drink these drinks every day,
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 these drinks help them to reach to win and success. If the advertisement movement for these drinks restricted by governments, the percentage of usage for these drinks would decline gradually.
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, some measures should be followed to decrease the trend of using these drinks. Governments can start to announce for strength, movement, and show the side effect of a carbohydrate drink in infected by many critical diseases.
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, the over-usage of drinking will lead to overweight, high carbohydrate concentration of blood and non-normal blood pressure. Did the government forced the production companies to replace or reduce carbohydrate to be the based on these drinks, People would save from many of critical diseases, which lead in many times to the death. To Sum up, the sugar-based drinks reaction dramatically on the human strength. The consumption of these drinks surged, while the government should take effective measures in order to reduce the usage of sugar-based drinks from people.
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