Many people believe that the most important things in life are free, they could not be bought because they are invaluable. How far do you agree or disagree?

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It is a fact, whatever we get in our
life
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lives
unconditionally without
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unconditionally, without
any monetary value attached is the best. I completely agree with the above statement because for
survival we
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survival, we
would need natural resources which are freely provided to us and the love from
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
human which we get in our
life
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lives
is priceless. Primarily speaking for all mankind in order to
survive they
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survive, they
would need air, water, land and these are the basic necessities. Without these we cannot even live in
this
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earth for more than 10 minutes. Nature has provided us
this
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in abundance and there is no price tag attached to it. All living being can use
this
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and there is no one who is going to question about it. Love is something which cannot have any calculated and
this
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is something which we get from our family member and other closed ones. There are cultural values attached to it which we inherit it and no one ask to pay anything as these are pure emotion. We are cultured with our traditional values that has been given by
us by
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us, by
our parents in the form of love and there
are
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is
no
fees
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fee
charge with it.
On the other hand
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, some people argue that money is really important to get all the luxury of
life but
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life, but
I strongly opine that these are temporary happiness and real happiness we get when there is no string attached. Love
form
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for
from
people and nature gift is something given to us without any charge.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adherents
  • predictability
  • responsibilities
  • productivity
  • reduces stress
  • eliminating
  • prioritize
  • spontaneity
  • creativity
  • rigid
  • explore new opportunities
  • adapt to unexpected situations
  • personal growth
  • fulfilling life
  • general structure
  • efficiency
  • predictability
  • creativity
  • adaptability
  • structured routine
  • maintaining order
  • flexibility
  • exploration
  • unpredictability
  • balanced approach
  • professional growth
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