Students these days prefer to take a year off between finishing school and pursuing higher studies. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? Write at least 250 words
Nowadays, many students prefer to take a
year
off in between finishing the school
and taking admission for
higher education.In Suggestion
to
this
essay,
I will discuss some of the advantages as well as disadvantages of the given statement in the subsequent paragraphs.
There are numerous merits of the given statement.Primarily, students would be able to refresh their minds from burden.To explicate, Accept space
,
nodoubt
, not only the adults but Suggestion
no doubt
also
the children are
under a huge burden, especially in these days, Suggestion
is
likewise
of studies and many
more.If students will take a break after the completion of their Suggestion
much
studies
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studies, then
then
they would back to their studies with more energy and would much dedicated towards studies.For instance
, in country America, in many schools and colleges authority provides one year
off for the students, so they can rejuvenate themselves.Moreover
, students can make a correct decision for their carrer
.To substantiate, matriculation is the turning point of the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
carer
carrier
students
life.Because, after tenth standard pupils decides so, which Suggestion
student
students'
stream
they have to choose or not
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not, such
such
as, non-medical,
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,
commerce
and other options.If students will select a wrong Suggestion
commercial
stream
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stream, then
then
they may spoil their whole career as future of a student is totally dependent on the senior secondary stream
.For example
, if a student choose
non-medical Suggestion
chooses
stream
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stream, then
then
he can persue
his carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
pursue
persuade
carrer
in science field.
On the flip side, the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
first
and foremost demerit of the given statement is that if schools offer a year
off for the students then
the income of the school
or college will fell
down.Because a Suggestion
fall
school
income is totally dependent on the students
fees.With the help of Suggestion
student
students'
children
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children's
child's
school
fees school
improve
its facilities for students.Suggestion
improves
Nextly
, along with schols
and an educational institution
schools
scholars
scales
universties
, teachers and other staff members will the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
also
face lots of problem
.To illustrate it, if students would not come to Suggestion
problems
school
for study purposes
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purposes, then
then
they would not give their fees in which the teachers will not get their salaries.In this
way, the staff members would not be able to sustain the basic needs of their family members.
In conclusion, I believe that although
students should take a year
off from their studies when they are looking for their higher education, but I strongly believe that a year
would be too long break for the students and also
create problems for the school
and universities.Submitted by Rana Gaggon on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...