Some people think that study is the best way to get news while others think that hang out is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today, I have started my writing habit. Every day, I set an alarm at 5.30 am but I never get up at that time. I just go pee and come back to bed. IN
THIS
morning, I felt a little bit UNPLEASANT because my BF was uncomfortable. He took me to the dormitory.
Although
I wanted to sleep, I watched a game show (I SHOULD HAVE SLEPT BUT I WATCHED A GAME SHOW). It was not long before I decided to study medical statistics. IT WAS Very difficult to access the ONLINE LESSON OF THAT SUBJECT so I was FAILED TO DO THAT, AND I felt so bad. I BECAME exhausted SO I wanna let my hair (BLOW OFF SOME STEAMS) BY DOING SOME OTHER THINGS
such
as writing AN English POST.
THIS
IS Simply because I want to improve my ENGLISH. My PIECE OF WRITING has a lot of mistakes.
HOWEVER
, I'M NOT AFRAID OF MAKING MISTAKES AND I WANT TO MAKE IT BECOME MY HABIT LIKE MY BF. ‘
ALTHOUGH
my BF IS THE REASON CAUSING ME DISCOMFORT, I FEEL A SENSE OF CARING and love him more. Whether he succeeds or not I'm still ON HIS side mainly because both he and I have lots IN COMMON. I THINK IT IS TIME FOR ME TO END MY
first
PIECE OF WRITING TO study FOR THE EXAM.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • structured manner
  • deeper understanding
  • contextual analysis
  • verifying facts
  • critically analyzing
  • biases or inconsistencies
  • comprehensive and nuanced understanding
  • casual encounters
  • different perspectives
  • consumption of news
  • enjoyable
  • broader discussion
  • unverified information
  • combined approach
  • immediacy of breaking news
  • misinformation
  • in-depth understanding
  • diverse perspectives
  • balanced view
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