Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem.What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

Nowadays the high volume of Population has increased in Metropolitan area
Thus
, many problems have occurred.
such
Suggestion
Such
as, air pollution, devastation of trees and so on.There are various points to generating
such
problem and
also
some measurements which, I will elaborate
further
paragraphs.
Firstly
, many peoples migrating from rural areas to urban because, for getting a better education to their adolescence. There are very few colleagues and universities in the village.
In addition
, The educational institutes do not have enough facilities to give advance education to students.The
second
most important point to moving is to get better job opportunities.Rural areas do not have that much jobs in comparison to metropolitan.
For example
, the survey taken by the Canadian government in 2019 which, shows around 70% of citizens prefer to live in urban area as compared to rural because, for making their family's life comfortable.
On the other hand
, There are some measurements which, government should take to solve
this
phenomena. The
first
and foremost point is to Authorities should build more educational institutes in rural areas with all latest technology so, people can stay there.
Moreover
, the Government should make some contracts with industrial companies to build their infrastructure in village areas.
As a result
, people from rural areas should get jobs.
For instance
, Government of India runs one campaign called "Make in India". The reason behind
this
is to develop rural areas with all latest facilities.So, citizens of villages can get better job chances, Health system and education. In conclusion, I reiterate that the administration should know the problem behind
this
And, try to develop the rural areas so that overpopulation in urban areas can be declined.
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