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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#person #decision #support
I live in the world where taking opinion is a basic
right
 of a human being.Some people think that everyone should not take any valuable measurement by themselves.
However
, I agree with the given Statement and, I will give my
further
 explanation
in
Suggestion
on
 a given essay. My
first
 and foremost point is I believe in a team work. Everyone should take other peoples opinion who, has better knowledge or who is older than us Because, they seen world better than us And,
also
 they experienced many problems in a past.
For example
, I would like to tell my own experience. When I completed my School. I have a big question in my mind that, which field of study
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 have to go. My many friends going to the Business sector.
Then
, I went to my Parents and told them about my problem. They help me to come over from my problem by giving
right
 direction.So, everyone should take other peoples opinion while making any important decision.
Moreover
, If peoples share their problems with other they definitely get solution of that problem.
As a result
, it may reduce their mental stress.
On the other hand
, some people deem that, If they share their problems with other they might be making fun of them and
also
 misuse that information.
In addition
, Sometimes Peoples may afraid to tell anything to others due to social status and ego.
Furthermore
, superiority is one more strong reason to hide because, peoples think that there is no one who is intelligent from them. In conclusion, I reiterate that everyone has
right
 to make their decision But, to share with other may helpful to getting
right
 decision.
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