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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is a well-known fact that the museums play a significant role the countries’ science, history and like. The museums can charge their visitors with some fee, whereas some gives a chance to see without any money. I am sure that none of the fee can deteriorate the value of cultural places. Fırst of all, some amount of money may be invested to historical monuments by state,
however it
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however, it
 is not enough providing their clarity, the staff’s salary, repairing the building. By saying
this
. The reasonable payment ameliorates to keep active and lively these kinds of places.
For example
, Mountain Tower, which the famous historical monument in Baku has an affordable fee (3-5 Manat), it means there is no barrier to visit there, as well as does not make difficulty to maintain a placement.
Secondly
, due to congestion the little price is needed to run and
also
 to guarantee visitors’ comfort. The grave problem of conservation valuable buildings is to maintain ancient things,
this
 means the reasonable prices obstacle unpleasant incident
such
 as burglary or breaking old items. Imagination of whoever wants to enter there will make crowded, it will
also
 hamper people’s movement into a museum. To some extent, free entrance is the right of people to see, to learn their history, science, but the disadvantages of paying nothing can demolish the existing of the museums. It is advisable to request the number of bills which all levels of people may afford. All in all, free entrance is not considerable method to attract people,
conversely it
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conversely, it
 is clear everyone can go with reasonable price. Generally, the affordable prices may prevent the congestion, provide clarity, the existing of buildings and
additionally
, can ease protection of the vibrant places. In the result, the downside of free charge outweighs its upsides.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Admission fee
  • Revenue stream
  • Maintenance
  • Overcrowding
  • Commercialization
  • Cultural heritage
  • Diverse attendance
  • Community ownership
  • Access to culture
  • Visitor experience
  • Exhibit quality
  • Cultural mission
  • Reliance on funding
  • Government subsidies
  • Cultural accessibility
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