The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem.
Dear sir,
I am writing to draw your attention towards the pathetic functioning of
system
used for rubbish collection in our locality which is certainly causing serious damages to the Add an article
the system
a system
health
of people.
Currently, nobody is concerned from your department regarding the health
crisis arising due to substandard garbage
collection in our region. The municipal staff is not picking garbage
from the garbage
dumps located outside every society. Neither they
show regularity in collecting the waste from each house. Correct pronoun usage
apply
As a result
, the dump is accumulating in huge quantity
and Fix the agreement mistake
quantities
also
spreading all across the roads.
Therefore
, due to this
worst condition
people are facing certain Add a comma
,condition
health
issues such
as disease spread from mosquitoes and flies. As a
result
people are even more scared to step outside their homes. Nowadays, Add a comma
,result
foul
smell is Correct article usage
a foul
also
spreading from those huge dumps of garbage
around the area. Due to which our health
and safety is
in jeopardy.
Appreciate, if you take Change the verb form
are
necessary
steps to improve Correct article usage
the necessary
this
condition by allocating Municipal workers on regular basis to collect the garbage
as soon as possible. Otherwise
, we have to report this
to the higher authorities. I trust the situation will improve.
Yours faithfully,
Jaideep SinghSubmitted by naresh on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite