Some university students move away and live on their own while they are attending school, but others live at home with their family while they are students. Which do you think is a better choice? Give reasons to explain your answer.
Some university
students
tend to live with their families while
others are forced to live far away from home
to pursue their studies. In my opinion, students
should live with their family
. As student homes are becoming more and more expensive, it has become increasingly common to continue living in the same Fix the agreement mistake
families
home
with the people who educated you. In the family house, students
can have more time
to understand what to do in their life
and they can save money
up
. Living with a family would enable them to have more Change preposition
apply
time
to understand what to do in a student’s life
. One of the biggest advantages of living with your family is the luxury of having time
to sit and think deeply about your career decisions. In contrast, if you live alone, you have less time
for all this
; because the priority is your own feet is to stand on it. This
is often your career rather than continuing to depend on what is special for you. makes you more flexible in your choice. as
a majority, your only responsibility is to go to school and study. Capitalize word
As
Secondly
, living with family would enable you to save money
up
more easily. Not paying rent and food Change preposition
apply
money
until you work your dream job or what you want to do in your life
is a great advantage of living at home
during the university period. also
, all your needs at home
will be met by your family such
as; rent, bills, foods
, etc. Fix the agreement mistake
food
they
don't have to pay to eat out because their mother cooks the food they want. As a conclusion, Capitalize word
They
students
undoubtedly benefit in different ways when they live with their families. As stated above, students
can have more time
to improve their career life
when living with their family and students
have
Verb problem
can
saved
Wrong verb form
save
money
up
easily. Change preposition
apply
on
the contrary, if you live alone, you won't have Capitalize word
On
time
for all this
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