Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

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Its Argued in society that due to traffic congestion and increased

airpollution

Suggestion

air pollution

there should be

restriction

Suggestion

a restriction

of usage of private vehicles the following

pargaraph

one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line

paragraph

would discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the subject

To begin

with the upper hand to control private vehicles is that it will reduce the air

pollution

considerabely

to a great extent or degree

considerably

and

also

it would curb

un necessary

not necessary

unnecessary

traffic congestions in the narrow lanes of the city

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Reduced air

pollution

would lead to improved air quality ultimately better health to the people

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Limited traffic would

also

drop the level of noise

pollution

which occurs due to honking in congestion

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However overlooking

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However, overlooking

the adverse effect of

restricition

a principle that limits the extent of something

restriction

restrictions

of private vehicles would be unfair

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It would lead to increased

crowd

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crowding

on public

transport which

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transport, which

may lead to accident while boarding and

debaording

separate into parts or portions

dividing

decoding

due to saturation of public

transport

which

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Which

will result in late reporting of office staff

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students to their

respctive

considered individually

respective

destination

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continuation it would be a discomfort for people in those newly

devolped

being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful

developed

area

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areas

where

avaibility

the quality of being at hand when needed

availability

of public

transport

is an issue.

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illustrate people in rural

area s

a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)

areas

are

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dependant on their own vehicles as public

transport

is not fully

devolped

being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful

developed

its time restricted which will have

impact

Suggestion

an impact

on their commuting in case of emergency To conclude

Authorites

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

authorities

as a start to reduce

pollution

should

initaiate

bring into being

initiate

imitate

car free day once in

month

Suggestion

the month

a month

specially during public holiday ensuring the

avaibilty

a positive feeling of wanting to push ahead with something

avidity

of public

transport

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Fully explain your ideas

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Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen , considering the significance of primary & secondary level education in a learner's life. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. Others argue students should be made to study alone. Tell the benefits of each study method which one do you think is more effective.