A growing number of people feel that animals should be not exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as human, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reason from your own experience and examples where relevant

All living
beings including
Accept comma addition
beings, including
animals are part of the nature. A large population
believe
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believes
that animals should not be utilised by humans while others assert that they play an important role in food and research. I hold the view that animals should not be employed by people for their own benefit. The animal exploitation proponents claim that animals play an important role in research activities. Researchers use animals in
laboraories
a workplace for the conduct of scientific research
laboratories
for clinical trials so that new medicines can be invented and tested before they are launched in the market for curing of diseases.
For example
, rats are used by
Pitt Hopkons Research Foundation
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the Pitt Hopkons Research Foundation
in US to study the effects of new drugs in the treatment of
genetic disorder
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genetic disorders
a genetic disorder
in children.
In addition
, animals are the main source of food in western countries. They believe that population of some animals like chicken, goats, beef etc.
will
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Will
increase at a massive rate if they
dont
do not
don't
reduce it by eating.
On the other hand
, opponents contend that every living being has the right to live. They make arguments that utilising animals
is
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are
infact
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in fact
an animal abuse, which involves torturing or killing them.
For instance
, some famous restaurants use chemicals and other painful measures to raise chicken for producing meat.
Moreover
, using animals for food is more of a choice rather than an urgent need. Many other
alterantive
one of a number of things from which only one can be chosen
alternative
foods are available which are rich in proteins and other nutrients like beans, legumes, leafy vegetables etc. To sum up, while there are many convincing arguments on both sides of the debate, I would argue that exploiting animals by humans in unnecessary and should be banned.
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