Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today's modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

It is true that

art

and

music

play a vital role in people’s lives. They are major parts of

country’s culture

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the country’s culture

a country’s culture

.

Although

technology

has developed

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developed

over the

last

decades, I consider these two components have

impact

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an impact

in

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on

societies.

Firstly

,

this

essay will discuss the importance of

art

and

music

and

secondly

will explain why children should be taught

art

and

music

at school.

First

of all,

art

and

music

help humans to identify the history of their country. Observing all types of

art

,

such

as drawings, sculptures, monuments and even

music

is the best way to be informed about the history of society. I would like to point out that

art

is the common language and it can connect people with same interests without depending on their nationality.

Moreover

,

art

and

music

are effective ways of relaxation and a source of entertainment.

For example

, many people relieve their stress by listening to the

music

or visiting

art

galleries and theatres.

Secondly

, the schools should allot time for teaching

art

and

music

.

Furthermore

, children should be encouraged and motivated to study them, because

art

will improve their imagination and creativity. These gained skills will help them in other subjects, as well.

In addition

, there are some children who have abilities in these fields. They can be discovered by increasing

time

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the time

that dedicated to the

art

and

music

.

For instance

, if children are taught

art

at school and they have talents, it will enhance their aptitude and they can be

singer

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a singer

the singer

or artist in the future.

Otherwise

, they will not be aware of their abilities. In conclusion, I believe that

art

has a significant place in societies in today’s contemporary world and to spend more time for teaching will be beneficial for the future lives of children.