Some people think that watching sport is a waste of leisure time. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is becoming more and more common for a growing number of people to spend hours on end watching various
sport
programs or news. For many of them, being familiar with
sport
rankings and positions of their favourite teams has become an essential part of their life. Some individuals argue that, watching
sport
is a waste of people’s spare time.
However
, I partly disagree with
this
viewpoint and in
this
essay I will support my opinion with examples. Let’s begin by looking at the positives of sporting telecasts. One of the main advantages of
this
is that these sporting competitions on the box are able to easily motivate our young generation and even adults to achieve their main targets. What I mean by
this
is that they can perceive that any people in the
world including
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world, including
themselves have
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themselves, have
an opportunity to succeed in getting outstanding results in any fields of society.
Secondly
,
In
addition by
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addition, of
addition of
being motivated, people might have a great influence on
sport
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the sport
.
This
could be associated with the fact that being aware of different
sport
events and
results
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the results
of their country through television these people can understand the weaknesses of particular
sport
teams and they might be more likely to suggest any advices in terms of the teams’ drawbacks, which could be incredibly useful for their results in future matches. Turning to the other side of the argument, being involved in
sport
might prohibit watchers or fans to do
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
vital works.
In other words
, they may give up own works and jobs, sitting
on
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in
the same place for an extended period of time.
This
often leads to unemployment or obesity.
Moreover
, watching TV might harm our eyes, with beams, which usually produced
from
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for
the screen. Take football fans as an example. Even though
it
it is
it's
getting pitch dark, they often watch matches in the midnight.
Therefore
, many of them suffer from eye-related diseases, like short-sightedness. To conclude,
although
it is common belief that watching
sport
is a waste of leisure time, I believe that people should use
this
opportunity with
right attitude
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the right attitude
.
Submitted by Dilnur Nematov Dilshodovich on

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