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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three the following ways of learning a foreign language. State which you consider to be the most effective.

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The question of how to learn a foreign
language
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 has become increasingly important in recent years as business has become more international.
Although
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 there are a number of effective ways, I am convinced that living in a country where that
language
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 is spoken is the most effective way of learning. Traditionally, people have learned
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language
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the language
 as a part of
group
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a group
groups
 in a
classrom
a room in a school where lessons take place
classroom
.
This
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 has the advantage of providing many opportunities to practise what they learn with a number of different people.
Therefore
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, the fees of
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formm
the phonological or orthographic sound or appearance of a word that can be used to describe or identify something
form
forum
farm
 education are usually reasonable, since a large number of people are taught at once.
However
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, the size of the group means that more demands are placed in the teacher's time. Students,
consequently
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, may not get the individual attention they require to improve. The amount of individual attention that
language
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 learners receive is certainly an advantage of working with a private tutor. In
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
, students can work at
pace
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a pace
 which is comfortable for them.
On the other hand
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, working with a private tutor can lack the social element, which is crucial in learning to communicate well in a foreign
language
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. It can
also
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 prove
to beyond the means
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beyond the means
 of many people. By far the most natural way to acquire a
language
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 is to go where it is spoken. Not only is every social interaction a
chanceto
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chance to
 practice, but students are
also
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 to
exposed
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expose
 to the real, living
language
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. As well as that, they are able to acquire a natural accent by imitating the people around them.
This
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 is not to say that, of course, that there are not drawbacks. Many people suffer from culture shock away from home, and it can be difficult to
intergrate
make into a whole or make part of a whole
integrate
interpret
integrated
 into a foreign
language
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 culture. In conclusion, I would argue that the
advanatges
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
 of going to another country to learn far outweigh the disadvantages, making it the best option.
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