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Your friend has had his/her first book published a few days ago. He/she has recently sent you a copy of that book.

#friend #first #book #copy
Dear Liza, I am not able to explain how thrilled I am to know that you have already published your
first
 book. That's a great accomplishment and I congratulate you with
this
 achievement. I would like to thank you to be one of these people, who received your book before it get published. I have already read it and a can say without any hesitation that it is one of the best detective novel that I have ever read.
Such
 a catching plot with a great illustrating of every detail. After I finished reading
this
 novel, I got the impression as if
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 have read Agatha Christie 'S detective novel, which was unknown till now. The ending is brilliant. I am sure That you will become a famous writer one day as your idol Agatha Christie. Congratulations once again Warm wishes, Lily
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