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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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It is considered by some people that schools should educate students on how to be good at parenting. I completely disagree with
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 opinion and think that we should teach every young person how to care and have empathy for others, independently if they will be parents in the
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 or not.
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, teaching every child how to be a
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 would be based on the assumption that they will become parents in the
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, ignoring the fact that some of them will no be able to become a
parent
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 or even, will not want to be a
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. Alternatively, schools should teach the students how to care and nurture for the any person around them.
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, the same skills that would be taught in the schools on how to be an admirable individual can be used in the
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 if they want to be a father or a mother. The education system should focus on showing a student how to be attentive about his or hers classmates feelings,
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, it will teach them how to be empathic and caring, characteristics
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 necessary to be a
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.
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, responsible adults can lead,
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, to good parents.
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, teaching a child how to be able to manage their own life, could guide to someone capable to look after someone else in the
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. In conclusion, I strongly believe that schools should not teach children how to be good parents, and
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, teach them how to be good people to others, independently if that one specific person belongs to their family or not.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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