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Employer sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree

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Now a days people are asking information about marital status and hobbies for a task interview.
Ho
wever some p
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However, some
eople opine that the instruction they asked is irrelevant while on the flip side people argues
this
 is relevant. I personally believe asking about passion or marriage status is mandatory field for office.
To begin
 with, for profession seekers there are some prerequisites to tell about hobbies, interest or marriage status and
this
 field is relevant believe by few people. It will help employer to know interviewer and analyse if it is applicable to business or whether the person is suitable for work and organization.
For instance
 a recent married lady needs time to adjust in the new family and office opening needs devotion and too much time from her, it will difficult for her to manage both situation and
this
 will help the employer to knowing her married life. Another point is to know hobbies and activity help an organization to organize a future vacation trip and recreational activities for them. While on the other side of the argument people disagree to share personal material and believe
this
 report should not be asked for post interview. The company should only know the basic data which is
r
Suggestion
are
elevant to trade, check their work experience and skills which are necessary to hire an employee rather than asking personal details. Hobbies and concern are free time activity and asking these kind of questions in interview are useless. To conclude, some people feel not good to share their interests and hobbies, but asking few questions about the personal life help company to look their decision and check whether the interviewer is suitable for company or help them to arrange leisure activities about their interest and
this
 field is not useless.
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