In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
The joint family system is becoming increasingly unpopular. In most of the countries around the World, the majority of the population opts to spend their lives separately unlike the old days.
This
essay will discuss both the positive and negative aspects of this
trend.
As regards to the pros, a plethora of people in this
world are opting to live in their separate homes. Firstly
, living style is getting fast and advanced. So, people do not prefer interference of others in their busy personal life. However
, it is better to some extent for keeping things private. Secondly
, the world gets expensive day by day. Therefore
, in order to control expanses, every individual is dealing with their own family responsibilities, so, their monthly budget is under the control. For instance
, in Pakistan, I have personally seen people taking advantage because their elders are still running their families, as a result
of this
many youngster are spoiled and not earning. So, being optimistic it is a better way to teach the children how to live independently.
In terms of cons, if an individual is opting to live separately, they lack human empathy. Therefore
, it is better to live together so they can feel the emotions of each other. For example
, in the Western culture, people prefer to get separated after their marriage and they send their parents to older houses. As a result
of this
, they are deprived of the precious time with their parents.
In conclusion, this
essay discusses the advantages of living separately is to be independent and controlling the budget. Additionally
, this
article also discuss
about the disadvantages of Suggestion
also discusses
this
development are lack of human empathy and emotional stress.Submitted by mtabish26 on
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