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Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

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Several individuals believe, that the
Third
 world countries need the investments as funds from foreign companies, while others claim that the tips and help with practice are favoured more. I personally consider that the
finance
Suggestion
financial
 support as well as advising and practical aid will be helpful for developing countries equal and there is a good idea for international organizations to provide both of them.
This
 essay will address both arguments and simply my view with examples. There are several advantages of financial help like development of infrastructure and state of organizations that offer good for dwellers in the developing states, help them increase the number of sophisticated modern technologies, which can cause the growth of quality. The companies which provide items for the general public like hospitals, schools, factories should offer products properly and support the well-being of them and when they get the investments from developed countries, they will be able to do it.
For instance
, there are an abundance of international investments in the education and medicine field in the Kazakhstan from Europe and USA which became the cause of the number of improvements and there have increased the number of well-educated doctors who can treat some illnesses which were unable in the past. To embark with practical aids and advises, I think that it is more effectively than finance. Because it is likely for people of the developing countries to have lack of knowledge about modern technologies and they need help from the masters.
However without
Accept comma addition
However, without
 money the developing countries probably will have not got the funds to provide professionals, adequate items for work like technologies which are needed during the particular process.
Therefore
, I believe that it is more appropriate for international organizations divert money for the
Third
 World states with masters to give advices on what invest
this
 investment. To sum up, I suppose that
commerce
Suggestion
a commerce
 without practice support is not effective and sufficient for the developing countries.
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