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Some people believe that a great difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial. Do you think the advantages of a greater difference in age between them outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays,
age gap
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the age gap
 between increasing extensively due to the busy and hectic lifestyle. In
this
 essay, I will discuss some of the pro and cons of having
large gap
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a large gap
 in the
age
 of two consecutive generations.
Firstly
, I will explore the positive points of
this
 trend,
secondly
 I will discuss the negatives and my opinion at the end.
To begin
 with, one of the biggest
advantage
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advantages
 of
this
 trend is that the
couple
 can explore their life without any liabilities. As
parenting
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parents
 in
early part
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the early part
 of marriage can make their life stagnant and the
couple
 will not have
time
 for
roam
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roaming
 around and spend
time
 together.
For instance
,
this
 trend will give
couple
time
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times
 to create
bond
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bonds
 and empathy, which results
into
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in
higher level
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a higher level
higher levels
 of bonding.
Also
, one can save more money for their future generation and make himself self-reliant.
This
 will allow
couple
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couples
 to overcome all expenses when their expense increases due to need of
child
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the child
a child
children
.
On the other hand
, parenting at
latter
coming at a subsequent time or stage
later
 stage can reduce a person’s physical involvement with
child
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children
the child
a child
. Because, increased
age
 of the parents
make
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makes
 them more physically inactive.
For example
, various studies showed that men and women of higher
age
 have more health issues comparing to
younger
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younger ages
a younger age
age
.
Furthermore
, it is quite possible that their children will not be able to support them at the
time
 of their financial need at the older
age
. In conclusion, there are many benefits and disadvantages to have a
child
 at
latter stage
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the latter stage
latter stages
a latter stage
 of life. In my opinion, it is
better to have
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better to have a child
child
 at
earlier stage
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an earlier stage
earlier stages
.
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