At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

It is certainly true that balancing population is essential. Nowadays, some countries have a relative number between young adults and older people. I concur with aging society can occur in a few years,

this

may cause some problems with the workforce of the host countries, but I incline that

this

case can handle in some ways. It is clear that the large number of people has an important impact on countries.

In particular

developed countries, Governments gain money throughout tax systems what are paid by employees.

Therefore

, aging population in sense that senior citizens who are eligible to receive pension from Governments’ state subsidize when they retiring. The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and government

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herefore earn

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therefore earns

less money in taxes. One so far reason for

that is

the young workers have to struggle with heavy workload to pay more taxes.

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hus some

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Thus, some

people tend to suffer enough pressure from family burden or “living wage”. So,

this

balance by both young adults and elderly people will get trouble in later life if we ignore it.

On the other hand

, it is not hard as much as people think to solve

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his problems.

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this problem

these problems

Firstly

, Governments can increase the retirement age group, perhaps 65-70 years old. People nowadays have enough health to perform productively at work.

Secondly

, encouraging immigrants from overseas should be done by Governments in order to grow the number of working employees who have an obligation to pay taxes.

Finally

, Governments

also

should use an amount of national budgets in order to invest in health care systems or even education which make it easier to enhance people’s awareness about social contributions and responsibilities. In conclusion, I strongly believe there will have some ways to deal with problems.