Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
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and more people are choosing to socialize online rather than Suggestion
has become more popular
has become popular more
face
to face
and many people say that is
the positive development but in my opinion is the negative development beacause
some reasons
for the reason that; on account of
because
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easy to see the drawback of socialize
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socializing
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online but
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online, but
have
four main negative. The Suggestion
having
first
one,
if you communicate with someone Accept space
,
in
the internet, it is very hard to see the Suggestion
on
face
of them. You can sure is
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can sure be
this
their face
, the answer is no. You can not
see their can not
cannot
face
if they want, they just find the picture of someone and put it in the avatar. It is very hard to ensure this
is their face
unless you call video with them. The second
of negative, that is
very hard to show the emotes in the socialize online. I think the emoticon and GIF can not illustrate your emotes. And it is easy to use body language in socialize
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socializing
face
to face
. The next
is, you can lose your information or your secret because someone can hack the chat and see the data. Recently, many account
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accounts
have lose
information or hack and they Suggestion
have lost
can not
recover. And the fourth negative is they can backbite and make the argument because they are hero can not
cannot
keybroad
. But they don’t think about the consequence, many device consisting of a set of keys on a piano or organ or typewriter or typesetting machine or computer or the like
keyboard
case
have consequence unpredictable. The Suggestion
cases
last
but not least, the socialize online can make you can not focus on work. Your concentration was in the chat and what
happening in the online
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what's
in
other hand socialize online still have the positive. Suggestion
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the
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The
first
one, that is
easy to make the friend. you
can make friend with people in Suggestion
You
other
place just need 3g or wifi. The any of various alternatives; some other
another
second
, you can chat with somebody in anywhere, anytime. it
is so available.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite