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Although parents are responsible for raising a child, outside influences play a key role in their development. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion.

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It is
well-known fact
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a well-known fact
, that parents play
crucial role
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a crucial role
 in raising their children, but people have different views on the question who affect our
life
 more – parents or our friends, colleagues and society. The essay half agrees with that father and mother significantly influence their sons and daughters, because, in my opinion, many different factors
effect
the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affect
 to the personality forming of each of us. Usually parents are very important, authoritative and the closest people for own children, so they are persons whose
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 and
life
 style unconsciously try to copy their young sons and daughters. Parents share with
children their
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children, their
 values and ethics.
Therefore one
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Therefore, one
 saying goes that if you want to raise children
firstly
 develop yourself. Parents are
also
 responsible for primary education or hobbies of their youngsters and these things can shape their
life
. In young age when teenagers try to separate from their parents and find yourself, they are affected coevals, friends or other famous and successful
influencers
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influences
. Teenagers build own personality and form their character, so they try on different
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 models, images and follow to some popular persons. Fashion, culture, social networks and popular movements have
also
 an impact on
youngers
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the young
young
younger
. Children very often have own goals, priorities and try to live
different
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a different life
differently life
different lives
life
 from their ancestors.
For example
, modern young people
are more tend
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are more tending
 to care about
environment
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the environment
 and our planet than their parents do. In conclusion, it should be said that not only parents influence their children, but
also
 many important and not very
much
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many
 things, different actions and people effect
life
 to each of us.
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