Some people say that the reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As a non native English speaker student,
firstly
I can agree with the opinion that learning a foreign
language
is for studying abroad, or just for working in another country. It would be essential studying well before going there. I heard many news saying that tons of young students have spent their and their
paren'ts
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
parents'
parent's
money in
learing
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
learn
a foreign
language
. The
first
reason I started to learn English was, like other students, actually getting higher scores in school and studying abroad later.
However
, as time goes by, I found it really intriguing to study a foreign
language
, which even made me decide to learn German. By getting to know a foreign
language
, people can think differently and
also
they could understand other cultures better because a
language
contains its nation people's point of view. And
this
is why I think that it would be
more better
Suggestion
better
best
to learn a foreign
language even
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language, even
though they have no plans for going abroad. In conclusion, since studying a foreign
language
can make people's life more fruitful and broaden their thinking, I think it would be more beneficial to learn it.
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  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
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  • intellectual development
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