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Some people think that it is good to be very ambitious. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative to be ambitious?

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Some argue that it is not a good thing to have ambition in one’s
life
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. I,
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, agree with those who think that being ambitious is a positive thing as it pushes the
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 to achieve it with hard
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 and keeps them focus and motivated The primary reason why being ambitious is a good thing because it drives to do hard
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 in order to achieve his or her goals. To elucidate, every
person
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 has some ambitions in his or her
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 to achieve, and these are achieved only after doing a lot of hard
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 and struggle.
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, I have ambitions to lose my weight from 100 kgs to 75 kgs in a year;
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,
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 aim or goal of my
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 will drive me to
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 harder in order to achieve it after daily exercise and proper diet. Due to
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 reason, I think that being ambitious is a positive thing. Another reason why I think it is a positive trend to be ambitious as it keeps
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 focused as well as motivated. If
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a person
the person
as no ambition in
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 to achieve something in its
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, he or she is not focused enough and can distract with negative things, like doing a crime or harm another
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.
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, a recent article by the Times of India revealed that in 2019, 25% of students passed their entrance test of IIT in
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 attempt because they were focused and motivated with their goals.
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 has resulted in them getting admission in renowned universities. In conclusion, I believe that having ambition in one’s
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 is a positive thing as not only does it push to achieve it with relentless effort, but
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 keep its focus with positive things.

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