You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter: - Give detail of the job - Explain why it is important to you - Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

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Dear Mr, Mishel, I am writing in connection with the opportunity I am looking to start my career. I am your ex-student of marketing management batch 2019. After graduating from
the
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college
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is the
first
and the best opportunity. I hope you consider
this
situation favourably. I am trying to find a job to start earning and help my family financial
need
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. I need
to begin
my work life
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a new path by experiencing
more
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realistic view of the corporate world and give my career in
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better shape.
Huge
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number of applicants are in
que
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for
this
specified position I have
choose
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to work for one of the top 10 fortune
company
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. Would you kindly provide me
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letter of reference stating
about
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my
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skills and dedication I showed under your guidance
.
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This
information will provide my application
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high chance to get selected. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Varun Chawla
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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