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The length of the working week does not reflect modern lifestyle needs, it should be substantially reduced to give people more leisure time with their families, how far do you agree with this statement,

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Most people have been complaining that the period of
time
 of working week should be decreased to give more free
time
 with their families, actually the working length requires nine or ten hours in a
day
 and six days in a week, so that there are only one
day
 for relaxation and spending
time
 with relatives and friends, to tell the truth in our society most individual need more
time
 for relaxation, I completely agree with people who considered to reduce days and hours in working organizations To say completely true points, more and more people cannot separate their own more
time
 to spend at home, there are negative reasons that
first
 people relax and will have only have leisure
time
 for one
day
 after stressing and hard working days and hours it in most
time
 can causes to physical and mental decease and problems in the modern life, because of lack of relaxation,
also
secondly
 if people sit all hours in a
day
 on the chair it may causes more illnesses related to backache because of lack of activity, if people are ordinary workers in some factories they have exact tiredness,
Besides
 we have to reduce the
work
 hours so as to get more efficiency and more leisure
time
 with our families, because we have to protect our responsibility about parents and our children more
time
. If we do not decrease
this
 long period working
time
 we may cause some crimes,
for
example we
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example, we
 go to
work
 early in the morning and we come very late in the evening, even we do not hang out with our daughters and sons, during
this
time
 they will be sleeping so we cannot care about and educate by ourselves
then
 because of working we do not know what is happening in their lives. They
may easily
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nutshell, we
 face to negative situation and they may do wrongful hab
its In
Suggestion
the work week
a work week
 a nutshell we have only one beneficial way which is reducing days of
work
 week and
also
 hours in a
day
 in order to spend for ourselves
and
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day
 our family,
also
 we have to get enough long
time
 for preparing a new
work
 days,
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