Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A true relationship between two people requires face to face communication and
time
to truly get to know each other. Regardless of what humans think, all individuals admire the feeling of being wanted even if it’s a lie. The digital world has created the sense that it is passable to be who anyone wishes to be online.
However
, I believe that the way people know each other online and the type of relationships they make virtually have changed and for the worse.
Instead
of being a true friend to the people around each other, most are being turned inward, forgetting the true definition of a friend. Human beings have feelings and they feel broken at times and do not always smile but the Internet only shows one's happy moments keeping one from fully being known. The types of
friendships people
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friendships, people
make these days are quick and short-lasting. In real
life
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life, friendship
friendship
, people see each other at one’s best and worst
time
and remain there for one another.
This
can never be compared to a social network
friendship
. One can only get to know someone by spending
time
together for the reason that the Internet cannot replace shared experience and personal communication.
However
, due to the Internet, people can make friends anywhere from the world which was quite impossible in the past era. Finding
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schools
and college friends and getting in touch with them is an advantage that the Internet offers to us.
However
, true
friendship
is not possible if two
people do
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people, do
not spend
time
together, share their common interests, talks a lot and help each other both in good and bad times. Rightfully, life is meant to be lived and have many physical experiences, bonding with another person’s physical presence.
Instead
of being a true friend to the people around each other, they are spending
time
online to make friends.
This
is, in my opinion, is a negative aspect of the digital era. In conclusion, making friends beyond boundaries and getting in touch with childhood friends could be the advantages of the digital
era but
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era, but
the way we are becoming dependent on the technology and the way we are pretending to maintain our
friendship
online have negative consequences on our personal, moral and social aspects.
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