Today, TV channels provide men’s sport show more than women’s sport show. Why? Should TV channels give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?

In

this

day and age, sportsmen are dominant in

sports

media, whilst sportswomen have very little attention. The optimal reason for

this

trend lies in the prejudice against

women

playing

sports

, and

due to

the fact that people

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more interest in

men’s

sporting events

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I personally opt for sex equality in broadcasting

sports

shows. One reason to explain for the

female

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females

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not being paid enough attention is the fixed idea that

women

should not partake in intensive physical activities. Images of female players competing against an opponent, some of which involve strong activities, are still considered abnormal

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a number of people,

hence

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to

women

’s

sport

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shows downgraded.

In addition

, sportsmen shows are more engaging to watch.

This

is mainly because the male is obviously stronger,

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aggressive, which makes their broadcasted shows more stunning and thrilling.

As a result

, people

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generally

preferred

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watching

sport

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activities involving men than those of

women

and the television studio can generate huge

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from matches and competitions played by males. Take football in Vietnam as a concrete example. Throughout the time of the 30th Sea

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,

men’s

football matches

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millions of audiences from different parts of Vietnam,

whereas

those

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the

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female

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have

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a

remarkable

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low rate of viewership.

Nevertheless

, I do believe that

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ignorance is unacceptable in

this

egalitarian society and female athletes should be given equal opportunities. If

men’s

sports

programs continue to receive significant support from the fans, it might cause gender inequality, which

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one of the most controversial

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for decades.

Moreover

, the number of

women

athletes has shown no sign of abating so far, and

therefore

, TV should cover

this

potential area more. In conclusion, the wider

number of

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audience watching

men’s

sports

channel

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is the ultimate reason why TV directors provide more

men’s

shows than

female’s

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on. I am of the opinion that there should be an existence of greater sexual equality.