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In some countries people encourage teenagers to find part time jobs. Some people agree and others don't. Review both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, it is clearly evident that most high school and university students prefer taking up some part time jobs. As a coin has two sides, there are individuals who support
this
 view as well as deny it. On one side, parents encourage their children to gain confidence by working on small jobs like waiters and accountants.
On the other hand
, most parents stop their children, especially
girl
Suggestion
the girl child
child
, from taking up different opportunities at
this
 very young age.
Firstly
, living life differently helps young individuals to gain confidence and practical knowledge, which will help them excel in their adulthood.
Additionally
, it will develop their social and communication skills in turn opening up a bright future.
This
 would help them acquire time management skills as well.
For instance
, a survey conducted illustrates that most students gain confidence to attend interviews, mostly by doing jobs at their early ages.
Secondly
, opposing
this
 is mainly seen by, either rich parents or those who have a
girl
child
. Wealthy parents spend their money, curbing children to satisfy their needs, preventing children from understanding the value of money.
However
, a very few parents deny their
girl
child
 taking jobs away from their home taking into account their safety and health.
For example
, a
girl
child
 living in India, is denied the right to work in a 8 kilometre apart office or establishment. In my opinion, I would strongly recommend both boy and
girl
child
 in a family to work and obtain the needful strategies required to tackle different situations in life. In conclusion, working experience can build up a unique personality for mankind. In most countries, there are bigger opportunities for part time jobs,
however some
Accept comma addition
however, some
 people either waste it or decide not to take a step towards
this
 due to various reasons.
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