Many people think that happiness relies on the responsibility of individuals, others think that it is affected by other factors. Discuss both views and state your opinion by using examples from your personal experience.
Some people believe mirth depends your onus, while some others believe there are other factors which affect their gratified.
This
essay will discuss on both views and give an opinion, why peace of mind depend on other factors such
as achievement of goal, wealth and their desires.
To commence with, some people ponder the joy rely on your onus because they think if they have less duty they will be more happy. For instance
, a man has to take care of children, wife and parents' prosperity so if the family is big the duty will be more so he will be less contented. Moreover
more onus means more work to do which always gives you stress and in a bad mood. For example
, if you have children a person has to leave them to school and pick up them, care of study and so on. Furthermore there
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Hence
, enjoyment relies on individual obligation.
However
, some people believe it's depends other factors such
as wealth, job, their goal and their desires. Firstly
, people become happy when they have enough money to fulfil all their requirements. Apart from this
, they become mirth with the employment, when they got according to their qualification. To exemplify, a recent study concluded that 80% people are happy when they were satisfied with their job and able to fulfil a their necessities. Besides
, all people have their own goal which they want to achieve so when they grab their targets they will become happy. Therefore
, other factors like job, achievement of goal and standard of living assists to give full of joy.
To sum up, on one hand people think more responsibility, more they will become unhappy, so contentment depends on onus, while on the other hand
, other people believe factors play a crucial role for the enjoyment of people. But, in my opinion, rather than onus prosperity depend on the people's achievement and their inner satisfy.Submitted by Sabu on
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