In some countries, people waste a lot of food which is bought in shops and restaurants. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to solve this problem?

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The increasing amount of
food
waste
has caught people’s attention at the time in recent times.
This
essay will
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
the major reasons and provide some solutions. The modern life style Modern lifestyles
makes
mature female of mammals of which the male is called 'buck'
does
lead to people product producing more
food
waste
. Today, people have
higher level demand
Suggestion
a higher level demand
on
Suggestion
for
[are pickier about their
food
/ have higher standards for what they will eat].
For example
, fruits and vegetables must be fresh, so that they can help people to keep healthy. If an
apple
earnest or urgent request
appeal
has been kept for more than three days in the refrigerator, some people just decide to throw it in the trash bin.
In addition
, if
food
Suggestion
a food
is beyond the expiration date, it generally will will generally be regarded as unhealthy
food
.
Therefore
, an increasing amount of
food
which was bought
(
Accept space
(
is bought) in shops or restaurants just changed to
becomes
Suggestion
become
rubbish after months or even a few days. Another possible reason for
food
waste
is the
culture
Suggestion
cultural
cultural factors. In China, when people invite guests to have a meal in the restaurant. , The dishes are the
food
is expected to be abundant and various, varied. In
this
way the host will be regards regarded as generous, .
On the contrary
, he would be quite impolite if no
food
is
leftover
Suggestion
left over
he would
instead
seem quite impolite (stingy). Especially in business occasions, to pack the leftovers is not allowed in the formal cases. Packing and taking home the leftovers is frowned upon in most formal situations, and is [an especially egregious faux pas / especially bad] after a business meal.
Hence
,
food
waste
can be seen very often in restaurants when guests left leave
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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