Many people think that zoos are cruel. Others think they are helpful in protecting rare animals. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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It is often argued that by some people most of the zoological gardens are inhumane, whilst others think they have a great role in preserving endangered

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in the world.

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essay suggests that many zoos display adverse effects of endangered animals and will discuss both points of view. On the one hand,

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there are could be beneficial aspects despite

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, there are negative factors. The main harmful factor is being cruel. It is clear that nowadays the majority of zoos utilise rare animals for its profit.

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, zoos target, making much more money because most of the locality is interested rare animals.

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, it is a regrettable situation in my hometown, where rare animals are kept limited space

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, their nutrients are not given in time.

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species

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began to dye gradually.

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, zoological gardens give the permission to hunt

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endangered animals.

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why, there is to go proven that they are pretty inhumane.

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, it is common knowledge that the majority of animals are unable to protect themselves.

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condition many zoos have a beneficial role in preserving animals, especially rare

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. It means that there are stronger creatures which caused disappeared rare animals. For

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reason, with the help of zoological gardens,

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species

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are protected in zoos as their natural habitat.

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, the majority of zoos in the USA have diverse endangered animal

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which can preserve themselves from nature’s detrimental effects. In conclusion, while there are both merits and demerits aspects about zoos,

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, in my opinion, one most viable way of protecting endangered

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is creating a natural habitat for them.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

animal welfare
conservation
captive breeding
habitat
ethical issues
zoochosis
endangered species
genetic diversity
reintroduction programs
wildlife education
sanctuary
natural living conditions
artificial environments
behavioral enrichment
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