Many people think that zoos are cruel. Others think they are helpful in protecting rare animals. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that by some people most of the zoological gardens are inhumane, whilst others think they have a great role in preserving endangered

species

in the world.

This

essay suggests that many zoos display adverse effects of endangered animals and will discuss both points of view. On the one hand,

although

there are could be beneficial aspects despite

this

, there are negative factors. The main harmful factor is being cruel. It is clear that nowadays the majority of zoos utilise rare animals for its profit.

Therefore

, zoos target, making much more money because most of the locality is interested rare animals.

For example

, it is a regrettable situation in my hometown, where rare animals are kept limited space

also

, their nutrients are not given in time.

That is

why,

such

species

began to dye gradually.

Furthermore

, zoological gardens give the permission to hunt

such

endangered animals.

That is

why, there is to go proven that they are pretty inhumane.

On the other hand

, it is common knowledge that the majority of animals are unable to protect themselves.

That is

why, in

such

condition many zoos have a beneficial role in preserving animals, especially rare

species

. It means that there are stronger creatures which caused disappeared rare animals. For

this

reason, with the help of zoological gardens,

such

species

are protected in zoos as their natural habitat.

For instance

, the majority of zoos in the USA have diverse endangered animal

species

which can preserve themselves from nature’s detrimental effects. In conclusion, while there are both merits and demerits aspects about zoos,

however

Accept comma addition

however, this

this

, in my opinion, one most viable way of protecting endangered

species

is creating a natural habitat for them.