International events like the football World Cup other international sports occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
International sports have been easing tensions in-between countries and showing patriotic emotions while they are playing.
First
, I will discuss about an audience who are like their favourite players and second
, how they will show attitude with others.
To begin
with, Every player has lots of fans, including other countries also
that will be a good encouragement to players. Sometimes players do not have a fitness or farm.For intense, International sports are not easy to play behind them player have been facing many issues like fitness, to get a chance in the group if that is
a team. For example
, Cricket is a mania in most of the areas for that players can sacrifice their life at one situation. The audience must enjoy the games with all. Few people are comparing with others and doing unnecessary arguments after a few days that could be fine, it is normal do not take much seriously.
Second
, Patriotic persons, they like only their state
players than if that state
is playing with one other state
don't encourage players. Patriotic emotions do not show at sports place due to the reason most of the runners could not come into the field. Give respect as well as protect your province when your province is taking challenges. For example
: If we want to show our emotions on state
than find out challenges help them.
I have to go with a conclusion, it's depends on the human mentality to take tension while watching sports. Patriotic emotions keep under control at sports place. Because we encourage every player while they playing.Submitted by chigurupati on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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