Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?

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people

often

said

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that famous

person

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people

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are paid so much more than

what

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they

deserved

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. In my view, I strongly agree with

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opinion. I will explain

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reason why for

this

argument. Like normal

people

, celebrities

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their own role and mission and they will pay for their contribution to society. But celebrities have more opportunities to earn

money

than other

people

. Famous

people

make

money

not only by receiving

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salary

of

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each month

,

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but

also

the

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remuneration

of

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famous brands

paid for

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them when they

appeared

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and

advertised

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for brands. Attending lots of events can help them make

money

very quickly.

Besides

that, some celebrities can

also

create their own brand or

they

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become

representative

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representatives

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for some brands. By the way, more and more

many

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people

know them and support them.

Moreover

, fans of them are always wanting to have products made by

idol

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so

this

is

reason

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why well-known

people

earn

money

easily . G-Dragon is

the

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typical example

for

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this

.He is a superstar not only in Korea but

also

in the world and that means he has a large number of fans. Cooperation between him and

Adidas

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the Adidas

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brand to create lots of beautiful shoes. By his

creation

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creation,

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every shoe is different from each other and his fans can not pass away

chance

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the chance

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to own shoes made by him. In

short

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time, all shoes are sold out. After

that

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the profit which he receives is very large. In conclusion,

although

what is your job, we all need to make the effort .

However

, the salary for famous

people

and normal

people

should be equal