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Some people it is good to share as much information as possible in sceintific research,business and academic world, others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Nowadays extensive
research
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 is being done in the fields of science, business and academics, some people argue that
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research
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 material should be freely available while others have the opinion that
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 knowledge is too precious to be shared unpaid. In my opinion, information should be shared freely with colleagues as it will open new horizons of inventions and discoveries. The sharing of knowledge freely will enhance collaboration between the colleagues and we can benefit from the struggles of fellows.
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, few developing countries have brainy scientists and researchers, but do not have the necessary equipments and laboratory to carry out the experiments. In
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 situation, they can easily study, they can easily study the results of study conducted by colleagues and it is only possible if they were freely available.
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, with the advent of globalisation countries cannot live in isolation from each other and so is
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work
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 which cannot be performed on an individual basis. These results are
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 enhanced with regular input from fellow colleagues which is possible if we put a
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 on the internet for free viewing.
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, few people believe that
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 is highly valuable information and should not be freely available as people will misuse it. It has been witnessed in the past that plagiarism has become extremely common
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 some people have developed the habit of copying the
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 of others from scientific journals and republish with their own names.
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 has been extremely frustrating amongst the scholars so they believe that the
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 should not be shared freely. As an example, the lady who made website www.
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, which hacked all the websites of books
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journals and
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 papers are facing severe litigation because she was a source of theft of articles of people. In conclusion, the valuable studies and
research
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 should be freely available to fellows as it will enhance the knowledge of colleagues and taking the credit of
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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