Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
As countries around the world continue to modernise and develop, there is more consumerism, industry, and transport and a corresponding need for more gas and oil. One option to meet
this
demand is to find it in otherwise
untouched and remote places, such
as the North Pole. However
, I believe that doing this
is not the right solution.
There are benefits to such
a strategy. This
is firstly
the fact that people wish to improve their living standards, particularly in developing countries, and fuels such
as oil and gas allow this
as they enable the heating of homes, the running of cars and planes, and the production of goods. All of these result in higher living standards, and thus
we need to keep finding new sources since we will eventually run out.
However
, despite this
, there are major problems with exploiting untouched and remote locations. One issue is that we will end up potentially jeopardising what are beautiful landscapes. For instance
, an area which countries would like to drill is the Antarctic, home to many glaciers and animals such
as polar bears and penguins. Drilling here would harm the habitat, and in particular
, any spillages would be disastrous to the environment.
Not only this
, due to health issues and global warming, we should no longer be seeking to use such
forms of energy. It is evident that the use of these fuels on a wide-scale has led to the pollution of many cities and the subsequent poor health of its citizens where car use is so high. Also
, carbon dioxide is getting released into the atmosphere, and this
may be endangering our very existence. Therefore
, we should be aiming to utilise more eco-friendly options such
as wind and sun for power and electricity for cars.
To conclude, although
there is an advantage of finding new places to get oil and gas, which is that we can sustain and improve our living standards, the negative impacts outweigh this
as we will damage those environments, as well as continue to harm our health and the planet.Submitted by amad lee on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...