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• In some countries, criminal trials are shown on television for the public. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#countries #trials #television
The mass media
tries
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try
 to touch every sphere of the human life. There are some programs, which depict about the crimes. I think
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,
 the criminal shows have
negative impact
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a negative impact
 on the common
men
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men's
man
 lives. In my piece of writing, I will shed light on both pros and cons of the crime trials for the public view. More importantly, a sole advantage of the highlight way of robbery and murder
may enhances
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may enhance
 the knowledge of the human beings about the ways by which the criminals harm the society. To illustrate, with the help of
ICD officer show
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the ICD officer show
 on Zee channel, the audience
upgrade
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upgrades
 their mind about the multiple victims of the offences. So, the people escape themselves from the cheap mentality masses.
However
, these serials have various gravest effects on the social environment.
Firstly
, the small scale level robbers
get
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gets
 an idea to earn surplus funds by illegal ways.
For instance
, the techniques used by the heroes on television allow the robbers to shift their mind compass to unlock the door of the zip past technology to loot the businessmen and financial institutions.
Secondly
, the humans lose the spirit of faith on each other's, because
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,
 the criminals programs set up our mind to investigate about each and
everyone very
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everyone, very
 deeply, and perhaps, sometimes it works like
hammer
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a hammer
 on family co- operation. I hold that in the recent era, the mankind are adversely affected by the illegal shows. All in one, the directors should direct the spirit and mental ability of the people toward peace and harmony
instead
 of violence.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transparency
  • public oversight
  • judicial system
  • educational value
  • privacy concerns
  • re-traumatizing
  • juror behavior
  • fairness
  • public opinion
  • media sensationalism
  • impartiality
  • economic benefits
  • legal proceedings
  • misinterpretation
  • broadcasters
  • legal institutions
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